Comments on: Awakening, Part 1 http://bluevulpine.net home of Terra Fabula Sun, 22 Apr 2012 07:44:09 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Dimensional http://bluevulpine.net/chronicles/terrafabula/awakening-part-1/#comment-2126 Dimensional Mon, 05 Apr 2010 03:05:02 +0000 http://bluevulpine.net/?page_id=694#comment-2126 <p>Nice start for part one. Man, if I could write half as good as you, I'd be able to write, period. Instead, I'm stuck with idea in my head, that could only be extracted through a neural interface.</p> <p>The way you started it was good. I didn't see any errors, but then again, I don't remember anything before the final paragraph I read. Still, this chapter, as well as the 2nd part, are two great works. I can actually imagine what it all looks like, and that's a hard feat to pull off.</p> Nice start for part one. Man, if I could write half as good as you, I’d be able to write, period. Instead, I’m stuck with idea in my head, that could only be extracted through a neural interface.

The way you started it was good. I didn’t see any errors, but then again, I don’t remember anything before the final paragraph I read. Still, this chapter, as well as the 2nd part, are two great works. I can actually imagine what it all looks like, and that’s a hard feat to pull off.

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