Comments on: New Year’s Eve, Part 2

By: typhoon

typhoon — Sat, 06 Mar 2010 22:16:26 +0000

Hmmm

Since Tari never came around to tell who Traize is she - and since theyre together Lenard - will look REALLY suspicious now. At last to Jadyn or he wouldn't more or less kick them out (The rest of the party is moving on ...)

By: Dimensional

Dimensional — Sat, 27 Feb 2010 00:59:33 +0000

I’m not sure where I heard that line about blowing up a piece of the nation in celebration of it, but it is very familiar. And still funny.

By: David Fenger

David Fenger — Thu, 11 Feb 2010 23:26:47 +0000

Ooog. I didn't get the electrons pun until the second read-through. Evil. I like it!

All sorts of plots and plans coming to light. I'm intensely curious what's up with Len and Jolene's auras - and wondering if Jolene's surname gives a hint.

By: Derek

Derek — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 08:43:53 +0000

“There’s a nice, quiet place accessible from the Strate-Haran" was Tari's way of indicating the Serin without explicitly naming it.

By: Tsunari

Tsunari — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 00:45:18 +0000

Also why not just go use the Serin?

By: Tsunari

Tsunari — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 00:43:29 +0000

It’s going entirely too smoothly. There should be entire countries telling them to “go **** themselves”.

By: Derek

Derek — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 11:50:55 +0000

I was tempted to end this installment just after 'as blood seeped out between her fingers' and roll the rest into New Year's Day (coming soon to an archive near you). But I decided not to be mean.

Also, as a random bit of trivia, my original script actually had Casi take the bullet herself.